Today i finalized my first draft of my stories script and is as follows:
"Rotten"
By
Sean Davies
21
Whitaker Place, Grafton, Auckland 1010
0278004787
Vala_purity@Hotamail.com
FADE
IN:
INT.
STATION, KASSLER OFFICE – DAY
Kassler
looks over from his upper story office at the calm streets with a
self embrace of pride and honor for his achievements as a law
enforcer.
Street
is full of peace and harmonious coexistence, with Kassler
acknowledging this is all because of his work.
KASSLER:
“Damn
I do a good job at ridding the streets of crime”
BOSS:
“Kassler!
Your in a big pile of shit, I need to see you now”
INT.
STATION, BOSS'S OFFICE – DAY, DIMLY LIT
Boss
is sitting at his desk with minimal light emanating from behind him.
His
appearance is that of a fallacious disposition while still giving a
meek impression.
Ordering
Kassler to ensue his own desires without the direct approach of his
real intentions.
BOSS:
“I
need you to get the cartels back into the limelight so I can once and
for all put them away for good”
Krassler
then sets out to introduce crime back into the society for the
cartels to believe the police have been slacking off and is now their
time to take advantage.
EXT.
STREET, FRONT OF HOUSE – DAY
Kassler
places a large bag of drugs on doorstep, rings bell and then hides.
Dealer
answers door, bewildered by what he is seeing, glances around every
possible direction the quickly takes bag in side.
INT.
PEDOPHILES HOUSE, FRONT DOOR – DAY
Knocking
at the door, letter then slides under door in which a photo of a
young child and an address resides.
EXT.
STREET, SIDEWALK – AFTERNOON
Black
individual walking along sidewalk, camera slowly panning with and
catching up with said individual.
Objects
are tossed towards Black individual from off screen in which he
catches in a state of surprise.
Kassler
is then seen tackling the individual and screaming charges of theft.
INT.
STATION, KASSLER OFFICE – NIGHT
As
Kassler watches the news to oversee the work he has done has played
out the way he assumed it would, he is shocked to see the Boss in an
article about the cartels being welcomed into the streets by him.
Confronted
by the reality of what his boss has just made him do, he sets out to
extinguish the anomaly and brazen his adversary's.
INT.
STATION, BOSS'S OFFICE – NIGHT, GENTLE MOONLIGHT ENFOLDING ROOM
Kassler
hesitantly approaches Boss's desk in-spite of his awaiting fate.
He
hears something behind him, but before he can react, the muzzle of a
gun is pushed against the side of his head.
ASSAILANT:
“Are
you ready to face the backwash of crimes you committed?”
The
sound of the guns hammer being cocked back is heard.
Screen
turns black.
Gunshot
echoes.
Possible
Message of advocate about the real evils of money and the
consummation one can be absolved in by money.
THE
END
I am also in the process of conceptualizing for other characters as well as continuing to hone in the design of Kassler and the Boss.
I have just done one concept for the black individual and intend to create more variates:
Reference images for the negro are as follows:
This afternoon i managed to create one more concept for the negro using the previous concept as a base::
Also created first concept for the boss using the fat cop concept as a base:
I have just done one concept for the black individual and intend to create more variates:
This afternoon i managed to create one more concept for the negro using the previous concept as a base::
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