Finalizing Story Script: Draft Three

09/03/2015

Today i had spent all day trying to clarify my script in which i had to rewrite a few times with the help of the lecturers i managed to cut the story back to its bare minimum. I am happy with the way it turned out, however i do think it is well too short but we will see how i can elaborate on it during storyboarding. 

"Rotten"

(Draft Three)

By Sean Davies

21 Whitaker Place, Grafton, Auckland 1010

0278004787

Vala_purity@Hotamail.com

FADE IN:

EXT. POLICE CAR - DAY

Kassler and Boss are discussing job.

Boss: “Wait here while i sort this guy out”

Boss leaves car and heads towards the house with Kassler waiting in the car.

Kassler hears a gunshot.

The Boss gets back to the car in a hurry as he says:

Boss: “lets go”

Boss is driving while Kassler is feeling uncomfortable.

Kassler: “What happen in there Boss?”

The Boss begins to drive faster and faster, he peers out the window then glances from his seatbelt to Kassler.

Boss: “I know what your thinking, but its not what it looks like. ”

With the Boss driving at high speeds and heading towards an on coming truck.

Kassler: “Why are you doing this? ”

Kassler then dives out of the moving car just before it collides with the truck in a big explosion. .

EXT. ROAD SIDE – DAY

Kassler begins to regain consciousness only to see the wreck.

With Kassler confused and upset, he stumbles to run away.

The cocking of a guns hammer is heard.

A guns muzzle is pointed at his head.

Screen blacks out.

Loud gunshot.

END

With the majority of the previous weeks hard work i had put into sculpting and otherwise now irrelivent to the story, its time to start anew.  



I have just done a few rough silhouettes for the Boss character and will be doing more plus concepts as well as start the storyboard once i have a design i feel compliments the story.

 

 

I had also done another concept in mudbox for Kassler:

Today i had recored my dialogue for the performance study even though i cant upload the audio....